Lovely colors here, nice interaction. The whites on the neck are a bit blown. The pano crop works for this.
In a perfect world, better head angle on the left bird would have been nice. From a story telling standpoint, if the female was in the background, would have told the entire story!
Agree with Randy's comment about head angle, I also think that if you could've gotten lower, BG would be much better. Still, I love the interaction, poses, light, colors, and detail. Congratulations!
Interesting interaction, good soft light and details. Could you have moved a bit to your right for a better head angle? If you have I would give it more room on the left to include the entire tail.