Excellent pose and I think your exposure compromise, to not smoke the orange, was the best choice, even though the blacks are blocked a bit.
As a matter of personal taste, I would eliminate or greatly reduce the reed shooting up into the air beside him on the left. It competes too much for my attention. That would also allow you to crop down from the top a bit.
Nice singing pose, and good exposure on the yellows. I would also remove the reed shooting upwards, and would crop from the left and top. AS Randy mentioned, you have lost a lot of detail in the blacks.
Thanks for the comments. The changes have been made. I cloned out a few twigs already, so I didn't know how far I wanted to push it. I think it turned out pretty good anyway. I also lightened up the blacks a bit. I like strong blacks, I could be compensating for my monitor though, so I just moved it a hair. Let me know what you think.