I like the pose with the wings spread for landing and the undercarriage coming down. Nesting material adds to it and I like how the head shows up against the dark area of wing behind. There are some hot whites on the wings which may be recoverable.
Love the pose and the COMP. Colors looks a tiny bit green/muddy.
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