Hi Jeff - Love that eye, agree with your comment about the DOF - a little distracting with the bill and the back of the head OOF. Maybe a tighter vertical crop might work a little better.
Love teh hairdo.
Keep them coming :)
Dof wise there is nothing you can do about it since even stopping down will not be enough .... however ... if you get the eye razor sharp there will be not problems. We tend to look at the eye and leave it at that. The eye is not critically sharp so your eyes start wondering around the image looking for it !!!!
Do like the pose and bg Can see how you set up and worked the bird since they just don't sit there with the feather up !!! Excellent bg and exposure !!! Big Congrats !!!