A like your pose and composition, but for me the image is too bright. The background is overpowering, and the epaulet is toasted. Might be interesting to tone it down a bit and see how it goes.
Just a quick pass at toning down the brightness a bit, tried to pull back the reds a bit as there was a red color cast, toned down the epaulet a bit. You could do better with the RAW file of course.
I think the exposure might have been a little over for that light colored patch Ed !!! Sure like the pose and bg, lots of shadow detail and all sharp !!!
Re post looks better but still a strange look to the light patch in the wing !!! One tough exposure !!!