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Thread: Sunrise - class (Bondi Beach KZN)

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    Jeni Williams
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    Default Sunrise - class (Bondi Beach KZN)

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    Next one - this I used Dave's technique to try remove sun flare.
    Is the comp ok and did I lift the midtones on rocks too much?
    Did use more contrast on clouds. Thanks for all the help!

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    Really nice Jeni, should try posting in landscape for additional critiques:)

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    Alfred Forns
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    I like it a lot Jeni

    Composition is fine I only wish there was more of it to the right Might tweak the clouds and darken a bit Posting over at Landscape would be a good idea and let Roman take a peak !!!

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    Gus Cobos
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    Hi Jeni,
    I like the capture...I would saturate the clouds just a tad to make them pop, also would lighten the mid-tones on the water and the shore line...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

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