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    These Guys are so cute :D



    Shot in Palo Alto Baylands, CA

    EXIF Information extracted from file:
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    DateTimeOriginal: 2009:04:10 18:23:15
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    Camera Make: NIKON CORPORATION
    Camera Model: NIKON D700
    Exposure Time: 1/1600.0 seconds
    FNumber: 7.1
    ISO Speed Ratings: ISO 500
    Exposure Program: Aperture priority
    ExposureBiasValue: +-1 2/3
    MaxApertureValue: 5.7
    MeteringMode: multi-segment
    Flash: Flash did not fire
    FocalLength: 420.0 mm
    Software: Capture NX2

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    Nice! Beautiful light you had, and you have two perfect poses. Minor tweaks to improve the image: CW rotation, good crop from the bottom (close to half of it), and toning down the dark line above the right bird's back. Well done on the techs :-)

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    Light, details and head angles look good. I would go for a tighter crop and a lower angle would have helped in this setting. I wish there were no shadow of the bird on the left on the other one.

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    thanks guys, if I go tighter on the bottom the reflection from the birds will be clipped, do you think that is OK?

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    BTW, how come the thumbnail is black?

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    Sweet light on both of them, and like the raised foot from the guy at the back. I would also crop quite a bit off the bottom, and agree a CW rotation is needed.

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    Thanks guys, I updated the photo with all the comments incorporated.

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