Nice! Beautiful light you had, and you have two perfect poses. Minor tweaks to improve the image: CW rotation, good crop from the bottom (close to half of it), and toning down the dark line above the right bird's back. Well done on the techs :-)
Light, details and head angles look good. I would go for a tighter crop and a lower angle would have helped in this setting. I wish there were no shadow of the bird on the left on the other one.
Sweet light on both of them, and like the raised foot from the guy at the back. I would also crop quite a bit off the bottom, and agree a CW rotation is needed.