The Columbines in my garden this year are delightful I have both natives and non-natives. This is a non-native.
I'm posting 3 versions (see below). 1: Nothing cloned out; 2: cloned LR corner; 3: also cloned flower to left. The first has more of the feeling of my garden. The second looks a bit out of balance, the third is the cleanest, but doesn't capture the feel I wanted. Maybe I need to include more columbines to get the feel I want.
Nikon D300, Sigma 105mm macro, outdoors, natural light, tripod, f9*, 1/50, ISO 800, manual focus, manual metering & pattern mode; PP: RAW conversion and initial noise reduction in Elements 7, (basic) editing in PS7, slight crop and vignetting; noise reduction with Neat Image Demo.
Anita, I love Columbines...can't wait for mine to come up!
First, beautiful overall feel to this image. I do think you've got a bit too much stem for the size of the flowers, though. I recropped to an 8x8 from your original 8x11 just to give you another look at it. ( I think an 8x10 would also work, eliminating just a little of the stem at the bottom.) I also opened up levels and chose "Add contrast 2" to give the entire image a little more pop. To me, the greens are pretty light and I wanted the image to have a little more strength to it. That might not be your intention, though, and that's certainly just my opinion.
I really do wish the back flower was more in focus but I think you chose the best exposure for the situation.
I would go with the 2nd version. For my taste buds, the bottom-left flower/bud provides a balance to the composition.
Might increase the overall contrast however.
Thank you, photo friends. You always provide good suggestions on how to improve my images.
I am intrigued by the different opinions on which image to go with.
A special thanks to Jules who goes beyond the call of duty to tell me exactly what to do in post processing.
:-)
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