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    Nikon D90; F/3; 1/1600; ISO 125; -1.3 step; 60mm
    Thanks in advance for your comments and suggestions.

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    Mirenchu, I think this could be posted a bit larger. Hard to see the details in this small posted image.Can you try to re-post larger?

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    Denise, is this size ok?

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    The whites look very nice Mirenchu, and I like your composition. The dark BG looks good with the white flowers.

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    Mirenchu, I think it's much easier to critique at a larger size. The whites do look good and you have alot of detail by the buds. The one OOF petal I don't love but the rest of the image is lovely-Well done. PS- I love your signature!

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    Hi Lady Mirenchu,
    I like your composition, image and capture very much. I like the feel to this one...It's simple, elegant and beautiful...the whites are within the tonal range. You display fine sharp details in the petals and the color rendition of the flower is superb. Your composition is balanced and has a graceful symmetry to it...well done...:) I took the liberty in making a few slight adjustment to showcase it the way it should be seen...I cloned out the out of focus white blotches in the background on the upper left portion of the frame and on the lower right side, I increased the contrast an the saturation just a tad , not too much, and selective sharpened the contours of the petals...see if this presents best to you...:cool:

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    Thank you very much, I love the way it looks now!

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    Gus' Repost is great!

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    Love that re post and what a base image !!! Excellent feel ... love the lighting !!! Really good Mirenchu !!!

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