Hi Mirenchu,
You got yourself a mighty fine pair of pelicans...I like the dark, rich vibrant blue hues in the water... I like the placement of your birds in frame...I would have liked to have seen them not over lapping each other...with some space in between...the head angles are a wee bit off, they need some clock wise rotation. The whites on the heads and portions of the neck areas are running at 255 hot, lacking details, due to the harsh changing sunlight. You can tone them down in Photoshop...I would also give them just a little bit more room on the top of the frame, they feel a little tight...I'm looking forward to your next one...:):cool:
Gus has pretty much nailed the techs on this one - I might just back down the blues in the water just a tad - thats pretty electric blue water.
Softer light would have been the key here - you are going to have to get out of bed EARLIER :)