Nice low angle and pose. I love the breeding plumage. The bird looks oversharpened to me. There is a sharpening halo around the head and beak. Was the bird on a slope? If not, it could use a little ccw rotation.
Good critiques above. I would add that the bird's head is angled slightly away from you--slightly towards you is usually much better You did a good job of getting close and isloating your subject.
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Thanks for the comments and critigues guys. It was a fun morning being surrounded by these birds. It was a flat mud/sand flat so I must have been out of level. Darn sharpening is one way or the other. Tks Dave