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    Bill McCrystyn
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    Default POLE DANCER

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    NIKON D300 200-400VR 1.4X ISO800 F/5.6 1/2000

    On a freshly painted gate pole this little guy was doing his best imitation of the Paradise Bird Dance he had seen on the Nature Series for his admirer watching on. Feathers ruffled, wings flayed, tail splayed, chirping as load as he could. The only thing I didn't get him doing was hopping off the pole. It worked, they flew off together.

    From an image standpoint, the fresh red paint and matching wing colors where too much for me to pass up. The pole gave just enough interest without competing with the subject to give what would be an ordinary blackbird, more impact.

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    Fabs Forns
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    Hmmmm, I think the pole does draw attention :)

    Pretty good EXP, although I think you could get more out of the blacks. Head angle could be a big better, but fair and you got a good catch light, which may or may not be lost in the head turn.


    The pole, isn't it supposed to be vertical???? :)

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    Bill McCrystyn
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    Ohhh no you don't, I'm not touching that one (no pun intented) :p but I would like to know how would you improve the blacks. I was not completly satisfied with them either.

    Cousin Billy :)

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    Fabs Forns
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    I'm guessing very light S/H although very easy to get them muddy. That's why I said "I think" meaning uncertainty :)

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    Bill McCrystyn
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    Default REWORK ON BLACKS

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    Thanks Fabs. I am always amazed at your eye. Problem/Solution. What a package you are. I used S/H +4 then added 9 points selective blk and kicked in the Linear Contrast preset. Mucho Better Chica

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    Good comments by Fabs. I like the original better, because the repost has introduced more noise into the blacks. The head turn is not ideal.

    Keep them coming!

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    The one thing I would add to the comments above is that the reds are over saturated. It is especially obvious in the the reds on the wings. Desaturating might bring a little more detail into the reds.

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    Bill McCrystyn
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    Default TOUCH UP

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    Thanks Aidan and Phil. I isolated the back side and ran a couple passes of despeckle where there wasn't much resolution anyway and left me with what I percieve as a better front end, shoulder and eye.

    Phil, I did knock the reds down a little but I must tell you the reds against the blacks in these birds is very bright. That is what caught my attention in the first place compared to the gate pole.

    Thanks for the critiques everybody. :)

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    Bill McCrystyn
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    Default FINAL NOISE REWORK

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    Trying to hold the eye and shoulder I reworked the backside noise a little more and added more Blk. I think I have a happy compromise.

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