I am not sure why it would be soft around the eye as your shutter speed was more than adequate. A little more sharpening may help with that. Maybe a slight CCW tilt too?
I love the reflection and pose. Very graceful and a nice moment captured in time. :)
I also find this one a bit soft. did you run a noise reduction over the bird?
I like the reflection and pose.
Have you considered a horizontal comp with a bit taken off the top and added to the right?