Results 1 to 13 of 13

Thread: Mallard Portrait

  1. #1
    Lifetime Member Stu Bowie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Centurion, South Africa
    Posts
    21,360
    Threads
    1,435
    Thank You Posts

    Default Mallard Portrait

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    This was taken at the University sports grounds of Pretoria. Im very surprised at the size of the tongue.

    Canon 50D
    100-400 L IS USM @400mm
    1/2500
    F/6.3
    ISO 640

    Hand held

  2. #2
    BPN Member Don Lacy's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    SE Florida
    Posts
    3,566
    Threads
    348
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nice light and color especially in the water, my only suggestion would be to crop a little of the right.
    Don Lacy
    You don't take a photograph, you make it - Ansel Adams
    There are no rules for good photographs, there are only good photographs - Ansel Adams
    http://www.witnessnature.net/
    https://500px.com/lacy

  3. #3
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Fairfax, Virginia, United States
    Posts
    2,712
    Threads
    299
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    The light on this one is definitely warm. Too so I think. I'd reduce, but not eliminate, the warm cast just a touch and maybe add some blacks to the blacks to strengthen things a bit.

    I really like the golden molten metal look to the water. Nice!

  4. #4
    Dave Barnes
    Guest

    Default

    I love the colour and the light. I would also take a bit off the right to get back to 2/3 proportions.

  5. #5
    Lifetime Member Stu Bowie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Centurion, South Africa
    Posts
    21,360
    Threads
    1,435
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Thanks a lot guys. I have reduced the warmth a tad and done a complete recrop - top, bottom, and right.

  6. #6
    Ákos Lumnitzer
    Guest

    Default

    Tighter repost is better for me mate. I do also love the water colors and the expression of the duck. Congrats!

  7. #7
    Fabs Forns
    Guest

    Default

    Stunning capture, Stuart. I'd hate to be the contrarian but I prefer the original with more space around. Color wise, they both looks good to me.

  8. #8
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Queanbeyan, Australia
    Posts
    268
    Threads
    40
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Another vote for the original post. Wonderful light and detail.
    I especially like the texture of the bow wave (no doubt due to cross interference with the rippled surface).

  9. #9
    Lifetime Member Stu Bowie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Centurion, South Africa
    Posts
    21,360
    Threads
    1,435
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Thank you all so much for the varied preferences, and for your valued input and comments.

  10. #10
    Lifetime Member Marina Scarr's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Sarasota, FL
    Posts
    10,347
    Threads
    403
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Love the detail, soft colors and action of this shot. Have to go with the the original also.
    Marina Scarr
    Florida Master Naturalist
    Website, Facebook

  11. #11
    IOTY Winner 2009 Mark Dumbleton's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Location
    Johannesburg, South Africa
    Posts
    589
    Threads
    14
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I like the second post Stu. Super timing to capture this. Lovely eye and detail.
    Well done Sir!

  12. #12
    Brian Wong
    Guest

    Default

    Hi Stuart!

    Maybe just a different spin, if it agrees with your ethics ... but I can see a one mean "fire-spitting" duck with a little adjustment to the background.

  13. #13
    Lifetime Member Stu Bowie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Centurion, South Africa
    Posts
    21,360
    Threads
    1,435
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Thanks a lot Brian. Dragon Mallards.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics