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    sten-åke nilsson
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    c&c are welcome.. 1d mkIII, 500 4L is. 1/800 sec. f5.6

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    Alfred Forns
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    Good looking bird !!! Would suggest a little different corp to keep the bird form mid frame, a little fill flash would have been nice since the light was coming from your right. I like how you carefully position the tail away from the branch !!!

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    I agree with that a differnet crop to move the bird out fo the center would be mre to my taste. If you have it a little more room at the top and to the right might work. The open beak is a plus. Thanks for sharing.

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    Cool bird here! Nice capture.

    Some cropped off left would be good I think.
    Exposed to the left too so +1/3EV and some added final sharpening for size would be my suggestions.

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    Cute little subject, and a nice singing pose to boot! I agree in placing the bird more to he left, and I'm not crazy about the zig-zagging branch at right. I like the branch with budding tips swooping under the tail but I find myself wanting to see the bottom of it too instead of having it clipped. The bird looks a bit smooth like NR was applied throughout?

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    Brian Wong
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    Hi Sten-Ake!

    Very cute bird, and love the singing pose! I am bothered by the annoying halo around the branches, perhaps in processing?

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    thanks everybody for the c&c,very helpful :) regards sten

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