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    Carl Forsstrom
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    Default Mallard



    First Post !

    2009-04-19, Angarnssjöäng, Sweden

    Canon 30D, 400 mm 5.6

    Tv 1/1600, F/6.3

    ISO 640

    Exp Comp +1.0, Evaluative metering

    Hope you like it !

    Regards // Carl

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Welcome to BPN, Carl! Very nice first post, I like the angle and calling pose. I would sharpen the bird a bit more and might crop it a bit tighter. Keep them coming!

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    Welcome to BPN. Lovely colours on the mallard. As he is flying upwards, I would take off the bottom, and add a bit to the top. Keep them coming.

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    Fabs Forns
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    Big welcome to BPN, Carl. Hope you can feel right at home here.

    Lovely colors and calling pose. I like the cattails in the foreground, so I'd not crop there, maybe a bit off the top. Congratulations! Grattis!

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    Welcome to BPN!! Lovely calling pose on this common duck. I like the comp as presented (just like Fabs I like the cattails in the FG). I would tone down the brightest part of the trunk in URC, and warm up the image a bit - doing this would also give a nicer yellowish tone to the cattails. Looking forward to more!! :-)

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    Carl Forsstrom
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    Default New Version !



    .. added some saturation and usm on the bird ... better or worse ... !?? :)

    // Carl

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