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    Here is another shot from the inside of our barn. This was taken looking up into the loft through a hole in the loft floor. My own assessment is that it needs more room all around so that the corners of the hole aren't touching the edge. What do you think?

    Olympus SP-550 UZ
    f4.5 @ 2 sec, ISO 200
    Manual mode, pattern metering, auto WB, focal length 7.44mm
    Processed in PS CS2; curves adjustment, converted to B&W with channel mixer, darkened the area surrounding the hole, and converted to duotone

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    Christopher, I like it .I think the perspective is neat. I like the loft on a diagonal and I like the pattern caused by the shadows-The sides touching don't bother me. One of your more interesting ones!

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    Do like it as presented and particularly like the small amount of shadow detail. Great feel and texture.

    All I can think to add is light streaks coming form the openings !! Neat !!

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    Chris, I like the angle and the perspective but the cobwebs below on the underside are kind of distracting to me. You might want to think about darkening those undersides a bit so the eye goes right up to the loft.

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    Julie, I had already darkened that area a bit, but I'll try darkening it even more.

    Thanks for the comments!

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