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    Lance Peters
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    Something a little different - wont be everyones tastes.

    No P.S. Trickery - Levels - Sharpen - NR

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    SB900 with Better Beamer
    Manaul flash @ 1/4
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    Commenst welcome :)

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    I like it Lance. Great use of shallow DOF with super colours!

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    This is great considering I believe you are experimenting with this OOF foreground stuff leading into your image. I quite like this to be honest. If anything I would crop a little tighter on top and from the right. Good job! :)

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    I think this is very effective, are you williing to tell us how you did it and what was in front!

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    Lovely colors and detail. I would prefer it moved slightly to the right in the frame.

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    Beautiful Lance, The layering of soft colors along with your nice details and HA make this great!

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    Excellent DOF, and love the layers of pastel colours. Very effective, and certainly different. I like this. Well done.

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    Well it's definitely to my tastes. Any time I can frame a subject with super oof objects in front and behind, I do it. I also do agree with a previous post saying that it could work a bit better with the bird to the right a bit more.

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    To the right in the frame and maybe a little more dof on the end of his bill. Other then that this is such a splendid image with the gorgeous colors and ideal composition of your subject within the oof objects. Sort of makes me think this what "bird heaven" might look like.

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    Agree a little more to the right - OOF foreground objects are nesting material and the ground - bird was actually over the side of the cliff - so the oof foreground is actually the ground - I was shooting at a downward angle to include the ground and what could be seen of the bird poking his head up from below.

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    Love it, great comp although I would've de-center the bird. Love the colors, pose, light, detail and FG. congratulaitons!

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    Lance,

    Thanks for the explanation of the position of the bird, now you have explained, it seems obvious. I have no problems with the centered bird.

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    Very creative Lance. No nits. All the best mate

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    Slipped with the cropping on this one - should have been more to the right and out of the centre - better half was explaining how I should be out doing some work in the yard when I was editing this one - LOL :)

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