I accidentally caught this bright male just as it left a feeder. With my uninformed PS cloning, I dropped out the background, which was already quite dark.
Canon 20D, 1/250 @f/9, ISO 100, 70-200 +2x ext., focal length this shot 220mm, flash with Beamer.
I might say that you need to spend a bit more time fixing the area between each of the Caudal (tail) feathers. I like how surreal the image is though! A male Cardinal flying through the black abyss... Neat!