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    Here is a vertical shot of the moon scene I posted recently. Hopefully this is an improvement. I'm not sure about the placement of the moon. Do you think it would look better if the moon was in the ULC?
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    Olympus SP-550 UZ
    f4.3 @ 1/6, ISO 100, -0.7 EV
    Manual mode, pattern metering, auto WB
    Processed in PS CS2; curves adjustment, slight saturation increase, and noise reduction on sky

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    Hi Christopher, I like this better than you horizontal pano. Would have been nice to see trees with all branches rather than the evergreen?? Just a thought. Keep them coming!

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    Hey Christopher,
    I'm fine with the moon placement but Jackie does bring up an interesting point on the evergreen. I would also add the base line of black.....isn't really working for me. I may go even tighter still if possible......by either taking the image while the moon is lower on the horizon......or use a tele to further emphasize it. Don't forget that early in the am......while the sun is rising.....also works with the setting moon.

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    Thanks Jackie and Roman for your suggestions. I'll have to remember them for next time.

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    Christopher,

    You on the right track. When I crop off the top of the image, I like the shape of the tree and the color behind it but the evergreen as a larger black mass is distracting and hurts the image. I find this part of the overall composition more interesting then including the moon. Look for the images within the image.

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    Thanks Robert. I appreciate your input.

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