Hi, it does look different...kind of funky with the pelican looking to me like he is suspended ("just hanging around.") It's positioning is good, but I'm having trouble deciding if the missing wing tips works for me. But it sure makes me look at the image and that's a good thing. The water and left bottom feathers appear dark.
I too get that same dark background with these sidelit shots in LJ. I think you've rendered it properly, it really is several stops darker than the highlights on the head. Eyes look sharp. The pelican in LJ is such a mature subject -- meaning so many "typical" images have been made of it over the years -- that we must look for atypical compositions, such as yours, now. I like it.
Hi Jimmy I like the spotlight effect on the bird Symmetry works well for me and do like the pose !!!!! Love the feel !!!! It was a treat shooting with you !!!!