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    D700
    70-200mm f2.8 VR
    95mm
    ISO 200
    f5.6 at 1/2000s
    Aperture Priority mode
    Spot Metering
    0EV
    Auto white balance
    handheld
    full frame

    Taken on the same date as the other picture. Again the spot metering was unintentional.
    Adjusting level, clone out birds in the background, fix the vignette, add a little warmth, and sharpen part of the wing, head and body.
    Should I crop this or leave it as it is?
    All comments and suggestion are welcome and appreciated.

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    This bird appears sharp and well exposed. On the negative side, the horizon (or apparent horizon in your case) is way too tilted, so the picture already looks like it is about to fall over. I would also place the bird a little more off center.

    This is sort of what I mean with the horizon tilt. :)

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    Akos, thank you for the suggestion.
    I'll try rotate the picture and crop so the bird is off the center.

    Does the one image per forum in 48hrs applies to posting adjustment picture in the same thread?

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    You can do a re post of the original within the thread to adjust etc No waiting and can do more than one if you have to.

    I like the re post very much. Could also select the eye and darken the pupil, will appear even sharper !!! I like the wing position, bg and exposure ... whites look very good !!! Excellent capture !!

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    After darken the pupil a bit, rotate 6.6 degree CW, crop.

    Did I rotate CW too much (is the right wing too low in regarding to the left)?

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    Very good third repost...I like the final product...congrats...:cool:

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    awesome repost, thanaboon!! looks great! are these birds' heads that light? ours are usually blacker.

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    Hi Thanaboon!

    The last repost looks great! Instead of checking the wing height, think about the background water and vegetation. So water by itself against the sky by definition is the horizon (level). You can also check trees, reeds etc., which generally grow in a vertical direction (unless wind blown).

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    Third repost rocks - great advice given by all :)

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    Agree, the third repost is perfect. Good job!

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    Another nod for the third !!! It is best !!

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    Thank you all for the comments and advices, very much appreciated.

    As for the light head, on that day I saw many gulls with blacker head and many with white head with black spot behind the eye. I also saw ones with mixing black and white. I think these gulls change the color of their heads depending on season. Maybe the one I captured was in the process of changing, or maybe the direct sun light makes the black look much more lighter.

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    Your rework of the suggestions is fabulous Thanaboon. Well done! :)

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