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    AdkinsTommy
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    Default Hawaii Rain

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    Nikon D3
    Nikon 500mm + 1.4TC
    F/9
    1/160
    0EV
    !SO 1600
    No Flash
    Conditions were poor with a continual mist and overcast. Typical wet forest weather.
    So far I have cropped a little, selectively sharpened, and boosted some of the color (hopefully not too much).
    Thanks in advance for all comments.
    Tommy

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    Alfred Forns
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    Hi Tommy First thing I would do is crank up your ISO to 1600 !!!!!! You got one fine performing camera .. give it a try !!!

    The slow shutter speed hurt you here !! I like how its presented, has a great feel. Would position the little guy more to the bottom ... I know you were trying to get the flower in also so is a tough call !!! Might want to post to at least 800 for better evaluation !!! ... btw love the avatar !!!

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    Lance Peters
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    Hi Tommy - agree with AL although it looks like you were already using 1600ISO - Like the overall feel just needs to be that bit sharper.
    keepthem coming :)

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    Well done! Give it a little more contrast, some selective sharpening perhaps and you are on your way! Ah, and make it 800 pixels high if presenting as a vertical comp! :)

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    AdkinsTommy
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    Have tried a few of the suggestions and like it much better. Thank you all for the input. I have resized to 800. I hope the repost is easier to critique.

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    REpost is MUCH nicer to view AND appreciate. THanks for going through that trouble. :)

  7. #7
    AdkinsTommy
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    I have reposted and would love any more feed back.
    Abbey says thanks, she is the boxer in the avatar.
    Again thank you for all the input.
    Tommy

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