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  1. 03-27-2009, 12:43 PM #1
    Arsdel Fluesmeier
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  2. 03-27-2009, 01:57 PM #2
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    Good pose, colours and feather details. Looks a little oversharpened to my eye. Possible that perch could be toned down a little and darker areas in BG lightened a little. Maybe a touch more space to the left and below. Might also remove the flash highlight from the eye.
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  3. 03-27-2009, 05:07 PM #3
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    Sharpness looks OK to me. Cropped a bit too tight on the bottom. I agree that the BG and branch could be toned down. Love the position.
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  4. 03-28-2009, 10:52 PM #4
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    going to agree with Tony - also looks a little over sharpened to me. BG doesn't bother me so much but would remove 1 catchlight in the eye.
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