Great interaction!! The merges don't bother me as the HA and eye contact are good on both. I believe the harsh light(which you handled well) is the bigger problem. Love the females plumage!!!
Denise, I like the image as presented. However, since you asked I don't mind the stick placement, but if possible I would have preferred not to have the beaks crossed in this pose. A bit of separation would be better. However, we all know we don't have control over these things.