This image was created at Little Estero last month on Artie's IPT.
D300 70-200 VR f/9 1/5000 -.7 EV ISO 1000
The best I can remember, he had flown in, landed at the splash area lower left, hopped to the right and turned to look back to the left. I like the head and wing position, the action of the tail.
I love the action here Randy. The head angle however is what makes this image work IMO. The outstretched wings, waving tail and splash of water make this a dynamic composition. The diagonal of the wings also strengthens the comp. You might want to boost the saturation on the green patch of skin on his face.
Great wing position, exposure control, details and eye contact. The splash adds to it. I guess you could increase the saturation a few points but it looks fine as it is.
Dynamite pose Randy!! Perfect head turn, and both wings are placed just right (but too bad about a few rough primaries on the left wing). You could try the sponge tool selectively on the green lore, set at "saturate" to about 10% opacity (2 passes may be needed).