Nice bird, nice colors, complimentary background. Nice angle of bird in frame.
For me, the framing is too tight, esp. in front. Although I tend to like darker images, I think brightening this one would make it stronger, and help it pop a bit more. I think your whites will tolerate a bit brighter rendering. The top of the head might be an issue re: burning the whites there.
Thanks for posting.
Randy
Last edited by Randy Stout; 03-21-2009 at 11:26 AM.
Excellent critique by Randy. Here's a repost that tries to correct a few issues. I did not take the time to add canvas, but I agree that a little more would help the image. I also lightened the iris just a bit.
Love the detail in the green eye patch. Yes to too tight. Excellent re-post by Doug--not the lighter iris among other improvements.
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Thanks everyone fo,r not only the compliments, but the constructive critisisms, all of which I have applied before printing the image for a local club competition.