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    José Rodríguez
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    Edited with Capture NX , nikkor 55-200 VR handheld,
    Cámara: Nikon D40
    Exposición: 0,003 sec (1/400)
    Aperture: f/8
    Lente: 200 mm
    Velocidad ISO: 200



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    Hey Jose - I would have really enjoyed your photo if you had taken a few paces to the left. Keeping the boy on the right margin of the photo - seemingly to stare into the sunset. I would have tried cropping - leaving more room at the bottom any maybe less at the top.

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    Jose,

    I am good with the crop but agree with Rob, moving left would have been the way to go with this.

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    A charming shot. I like the composition as is and would not have put the sun to the boy's left. The only thing that bothered me was the halo around the boy.


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    José Rodríguez
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    David, you're night. I processed this one with Capture Nx some time ago. but I think I'll have to reprocess again avoiding that problem. Thanks for your comments !

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hi Jose,
    David did catch my thought on the halo and I too agree with Jeffrey and Robert on the 2 steps left would have made the image stronger. I do like the crop as presented.......and with the removal of the halo....this will be a nice image....even with the boy centered.

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    Hey Joe, I am with David. I like the COMP exactly as is. It leads the viewer to think, "The sun is so pretty; he must be looking at something really interesting."
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