I have to disagree about the harsh light. The light is great however, you are photographing from the wrong angle creating deep shadows. I do agree with more room to the left.
I like the pose and details. Light doesn't bother me as the important areas are well lit and the shadow on the body shows off the curve of the neck well and I like the shadow of the bill on the wing - having the underparts shaded is natural. More space on the left would be much better and blurred spot already noted.