I like the symmetry and direct eye contact. I think Axel's pano crop suggestion is worth a try. You were brave to use ISO 100 (I would have been at 400 to gain DOF and SS for BIF) - result is good though. Love the feather details.
When this image opened my reaction was "Oh, God!" Positives all noted above. Either the suggested pano crop or at least a crop from below would work for me.
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