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    Gail Cordes
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    Default Here Comes Breakfast

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    This is my first post on a critique forum. This image was made in the Everglades during a workshop with Fabs and Alfred Forns. We watched the nest for quite a while before Dad came into view with the fish. Mom and the two kids were eagerly waiting his arrival.

    40D 300mm f4 with 1.4 TC ISO 400 f8 1/2000 hand held. This image represents a rather large crop and I added a bit of canvas to the bottom. Noise Ninja and the usual PS stuff done.

    Since I am new at this, any advice would be appreciated.

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    Gus Cobos
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    A big warm welcome to the BPN family Gail...:) Glad to have you on board...This a very good first post...You have a good head angle with a clear sharp eye...I like the open wing position. You have good color rendition on your subject with sharp details in the feathers...the fish is a bonus, and it too has a good head angle...I like this very much...the baby blue sky compliments you subject quite well...you did well...congrats...and looking forward to seeing more of your work...:D Once again, welcome to the family...:cool:

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    Gail, Hello again and as Gus said-Welcome to this very friendly forum-You have a great first post-You have a nice HA and sharp eye! Hard to get these fast birds in flight and you did well-Must have been all the pointers by Fabs and Alfred-BG and your placement in the frame is very good! The fish with open mouth is gravy!!!!:)

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    HI Gail - another big welcome to the BPN Family - Nice first Post :)

    You have all the techs covered here - must be good teachers :) Like the action and even a good head angle on the fish and with a open mouth - well done :)

    Looking forward to seeing more :)

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    big welcome to BPN and awesome first post. the gang covered the techs nicely above. keep em coming!!

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    Gail all the techs covered, the only thing I can add is that you can post a little larger. See the thread at the top of the forum. And...welcome !

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