Assignment: Mood with Light

[Gail Spitler]

Here is my contribution to the current assignment. As a composition, I wish I did not have the dark clump in the UR, but I don't think I can crop it out. Also, I have left the blue of the shadows to play off against the whites.
This is my first attempt at this kind of image and I am looking forward to your comments and suggestions. Should I crop some off the bottom?
Thanks for looking
Gail
Canon 40D with 70-200mm at 189mm, f/32, 1/30 sec, pattern metering with +1.33 comp, ISO 200

[Nonda Surratt]

Gail,

Except for the clump UR, I quite like this!

[denise ippolito]

Gail, I like the interesting humps and the color pattern w/ the shadows-that clump up top is a bit distracting-But it is a neat looking image!

[Gus Cobos]

Hi Gail,
I like it as presented, I like the play on light and shadows...:cool:

[KurtPreston]

I like it as is too. The clump serves to add a bit of depth and scale for me.