Hi Kerry - You have good details in the feathers and a good HA. Good to see you still using the flash and getting to grips with it.
I would get rid of the larger catchlight at the top of the eye -- Compositionally would like to see more room in front of the bird than behind.
Looking forward to more :)
Hi Kerry,
just a tad more room to the right side of the frame and fix the catch light...I like the fine details and good color rendition...well done Sir...:cool: