I like the overall idea of one bird in focus and two similar ones OOF in the bg. However, if you could have taken this from a lower angle and with slightly less DOF the concept would have been much stronger. Is it me or does this need some CCW-rotation?
As always, very artistic Fabs. The light and comp. are wonderful. Just me , but I'm not crazy about one in focus and two soft. Just my taste. And I too feel it needs a bit of CCW rotation.