I found this Dunlin (correct me if I'm wrong on the bird ID) among the rocks in Barnaget NJ. Canon 40D, 500 MM lens with 1.4 extender, ISO 800 1/800 sec, F/8, Gitzo tripod with wimberly head, center point focus.
The bird is sharp with nice detail in the feathers, I like the ripples around the beak.
The head is turned just a bet away, and the body is angled just a tiny bit away. A small step to your left would have improved the head angle, and perhaps framed the head a bit better against the water. A slightly lower angle, you getting lower, might improve it a bit. That isn't always possible of course.
The water appears a bit oversaturated, but obviously you were there and can be a better judge. It just makes you think about it.
I am not as keen on this image as the previous posters. First off, the BKGR probelmatic and you are looking down on the bird from above. More importantly, the lower half of the bird including the lower half of the bird's face is in shadow. For me this is an image killer and I am not sure why it was not mentioned above. Lastly, the bird, and the bird's head are angled away from you.
It is a Dunlin (in worn first winter plumage).
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