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    D300 / 200-400 VR
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    Simcoe Ontario, Canada

    hand held, natural light, slight crop

    Another one from last weekends shoot., thanks again to David Hemmings, and Malcolm Benn for joining us on this workshop.
    Last edited by Raymond Barlow; 02-26-2009 at 03:36 PM. Reason: removed cloning mistake

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    I like the wing position, incoming pose and underwing details and setting. I might clone out the bush in the upper right.

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    Very nice Raymond. I like the muted saturation. As is the bush in upper right offers good compositional balance - I like it there. If you do clone it out you will need to counter that with some cropping from above to avoid unecessary empty space up there. Either way would look good.

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    I agree with Daniel on all accounts. The brown tones make the image for me.

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    Ray, I like this one a lot. Love the subtle colors--dramatic pose. I think I would be tempted to just tone out the darker parts of that bush and leave the crop as is.

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    The image is good. My take on the bush would be to select it and put it in its own layer; add some gausian blurr to mut it and push it to the back more, then us blending modes to adjust to image. I have a question. There is a feather that appears to protrud from under the birds right wing. It looks like a tail feather but looking at it closely it does not appear to be attached to eithte the wing, not does it have a continuing shaft from the tail. It has the appearance of just appearing with no know source. ? Good image.

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    I like it as presented and think its an outstanding image. Got a bird in flight sharp in a good flight position and also a great setting to go along with it !!! Big Congrats !!!

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    thanks everyone, comments appreciated.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mark Schmitt View Post
    The image is good. My take on the bush would be to select it and put it in its own layer; add some gausian blurr to mut it and push it to the back more, then us blending modes to adjust to image. I have a question. There is a feather that appears to protrud from under the birds right wing. It looks like a tail feather but looking at it closely it does not appear to be attached to eithte the wing, not does it have a continuing shaft from the tail. It has the appearance of just appearing with no know source. ? Good image.
    Thanks Mark., good eye, it was late at night, and that is a poor cloning mistake., as I did clone out the jessies.

    I will make the correction asap.

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    Great flight shot Ray, I like the head on pose and the muted colors.

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    I like this one Raymond!

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    Just want to say that I think this is a truly wonderful image. Thank you for sharing.
    I look forward to more.
    Dick Glover

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    Killer image Ray! Love the owl´s stare and the environment. Very good job

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