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    Default A quiet moment at Tarangire

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    These young elephants were resting in the shade at Tarangire National Park in Tanzania. I found the evident tenderness between the two quite moving. To get good rendition of the elephants, the background went very high key, so I brought in a bit of cyan in the sky area to temper the abrupt transition.

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    I really like the mood in this one. I might sharpen it a tad more and would be tempted to clone out the third elephant on the right.

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    I like the interactions between the two. Somehow am not too comfortable with the colours.
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    Very sweet touching moment. The composition is very nice with excellent detail and crop.

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    Nice interaction. I like the repost with the added contrast.

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    Craig,

    The added contrast and sharpen really helps. Good job capturing the moment. I think changing the BG sky to be more blue would help with Saby's comment on the colors. The sky has a green cast. If you select the sky (magic wand will easily do that) and use Hue/Saturation, desaturate the green channel or the master channel to move it more neutral in color.
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    Thank you all for your thoughts. The editing possibilities do abound, and on second look I must agree with Sabyasachi that the sky color I created is a bit noxious. It was originally plain bright white, since I was shooting uphill toward a sky that was far brighter than the subjects.

    So while we're manipulating the BG, and to make a point, how about this (full disclosure): I have now removed the extra elephant haunch, selected the white sky areas, and pasted into the selection a landscape image I took 30 minutes later near this same spot. I adjusted the color balance of the pasted landscape to approximate that of the elephant image and then brightened it and reduced its contrast to make it subordinate to the subject image. I then reversed the selection and increased the elephant contrast only slightly so as not to make the contrast or sharpness too hard for the mood of the image. (I think some softness here is desirable.)

    Given that, we now have a perhaps more pleasant, but synthetic image, since it now shows the subjects with a background that for them did not exist. Well, did a blue sky exist? The deleted third elephant certainly did. Even when we take the image "straight out of the camera", the image has already been manipulated -- color balance, brightness, sharpness, saturation -- all sorts of preset parameters that can cause the image to differ from the scene originally witnessed in the field. Is the goal to document, or to create an artistically pleasing piece? It's a great day when we get both into the same frame!

    Further thoughts?

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    Hey Craig, I really love the final repost, the photo illustration. The BKGR makes it. For the ORIG capture, it would have been great to have moved the van forward and to the right to better parallel the two animals. Good job with the filtered light. I would lose the fore and aft bright grasses.

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    Very nice final repost, of a great moment, great interaction and textures. Keep them coming!

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    Thank you Artie, and Fabs, you made my day! This elephant group was great to watch. Only three minutes later, here's what these same "little" rascals were up to.
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    Sweet and YAW. The image above could also use blacker blacks and neutrals and a bit more contrast.
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