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Thread: Dawn - January 1, 2008

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    Lance Warley
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    Default Dawn - January 1, 2008

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    These were the actual colors this morning at Green Cay. I only hope I did them justice.

    40D 17-85mm at 28mm f22 0.3ss iso100

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    Alfred Forns
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    I'm impressed Lance !!!!!! Sure wish I could have gotten up this morning Awesome colors !!!

    Might even look stronger without the foreground !!! Big Congrats !!!

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    Fabs Forns
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    What colors!!!!!
    Nice way to begin the year.

    I would get rid of the foreground and concentrate on the beauty behind. The strip of fog is a nice touch.

    happy New Year, my friend :)

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    I agree with Fabs: this is an excellent candidate for a panoramic crop.

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    Lance Warley
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    Thanks, everyone.

    Something like this...?

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    Fabs Forns
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    Cleaner yet, get in the water :)

    Then go to selective color and pick blacks from the drop menu and move the slider to the max in blacks.

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    Lance Warley
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    I use Elements 5 and Lightroom, Fabs. No selective color.

    Any workaround?

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    Maxis Gamez
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    Outstanding. I like both versions.

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    Fabs Forns
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lance Warley View Post
    I use Elements 5 and Lightroom, Fabs. No selective color.

    Any workaround?
    In Lightroom, go to Levels and selects blacks. The idea is to make the blacks as dark as you can.

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    Lance Warley
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    I think I've got it, now.

    Thanks for the tutorial, Fabs.

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    Michael Rosenbaum
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    What a great landscape, Lance! The colors (especially the last revision) are wonderful. The cropping works; with the original foreground you actually had two images, both of which are stronger when separated (simplified).

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    Robert Amoruso
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    Welcome aboard Lance. I would take the remaining foliage out of the FG bottom of the frame. I like the new intensity of the colors in the second version.

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    The last crop is my favorite of the bunch so far, but I agree with Robert I would consider cropping out the last bit of foreground vegetation. Great depth, he alternating layers of foliage through the scene make the image for me.

    Jason

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