Much better with the eye, very lively looking now :) I'm a little torn between liking this composition and wanting to see the bill unchopped. I absolutely love the head position and eye contact.
I don't have problem with the deliberate clip of the bill Jose,
I do recommend on toning down the hot spots in the whites...I like this...good show...looking forward to your next one...:cool:
That is one bird I would work over and over !!! Neat !!! All you need is the right light... I'm sure early late is not an option so overcast would be best !!! ... no problem on the beak !!!