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    Nonda Surratt
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    Ok me playing around it sounded like a good title.

    Thoughts?

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    Hi Nonda,
    I like the composition showing the habitat...I also like the bird looking into his environment...He looks a little on the soft side; might want to selective sharpen him and also would like to see the habitat a little more saturated...but thats my personal taste...I like the feel...good show...:cool:

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    Agree Gus..Not sure if bird will take too much more on the sharpen but will see...Rather large crop:D

    Here ya go Gus more sharpen and more sat..THis probably should have hit the trash
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    Interesting composition and effective Do like the overall feel

    Would like some separation between the oof foreground and bg elements. I find these type more difficult than conventional but so rewarding when they work !! I like it a lot !!

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    Nonda, I love the soft colors has a really nice feel to it.

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    Lovely compostion Nonda, and dreamy! I like how the wings stand out from the rest of the colors. Might have gone a little more aggessive with NR in the bg or maybe a bit of blur.

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    I like it Nonda...:):D:):cool:

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    Excellent, Nonda! "Dreaming" is just the right title for this one. I think it would have a more "dreamy" feel if the image faded and brightened on the right (curves adj. layer), so that all details are on the subject side. And I "cheat sharpened" the dreamer just a bit.


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    Great feel to this capture Nonda. Love the soft colors and composition.

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    I like the one with the eye sharper. It looks strange to have the wings and the tail sharper than the eye. Like the soft color though.

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    Love the soft dreamy feel and colours :)

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    nice compo! and feel! now all it needs is the poem to go along with the title in the area right of the bird.

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    Well I'll be, thanks...

    David, explain 'cheat sharpen' please. Looking at the bird I think I might know what you did, really like it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nonda Surratt View Post
    Well I'll be, thanks...

    David, explain 'cheat sharpen' please. Looking at the bird I think I might know what you did, really like it.
    I used the clone tool, very small with a hard edge, and just cloned out the soft transition that makes edges look blurred. You can work on either side of the edge -- subject side or background side. Or both. Clone on a blank layer, of course.

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    Thanks David..Learned something new

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    Like the original softness of the bird Nonda, with the branches on the right blurred. You could also try surface blur??? Love the pastels.

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