Sharp, and a great pose and head angle. Thanks for the BLUBB mention
The only problem is the CYAN electric sky. For the repost I de-SAT-ed the BLUE and the CYAN but the jpeg got lumpy so I did a 6-peixel Gaussian blur on the BKGR and erased the edges of the bird that were affected.
ps: I also added Black to the White in Selective Color to tone down the breast.
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Artie - you are spot on about the sky and chest. Thanks for the rework. As Doug pointed out, the hawk could use a little contrast boost, but also a little more saturation. I took some of the sat. out on parts of the bird (ie feet) as the dreaded red channel blew when converting to srgb for web. But a tad more would help it. Those feet should be yellowish.
Here's my rework. Took the tiff back into camera raw, where I could do global and local adjustments with the new adjustment brush (similar to what can be found in Lightroom 2 and Capture NX2). I left more blue in the sky. Is it still too electric?
Last edited by david cramer; 02-08-2009 at 02:11 PM.
Good job on the bird. The sky is a little too electric for my taste but just a smidge.
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