Kevin, you have a good HA and pose. Just might suggest toning down the whites a bit to bring out more feather detail. The lighting looks a little harsh. Remember to post your specs!!!
Thanks for all your comments. This was pretty much out of camera. A little tweak here and there in Lightroom (a little recovery and a small boost in saturation with levels adjustment) Not cropped at all, so nothing to add to surround. Picture tweaked .... but does this now look off-white?