Went out to a local park today and lucked out with this flyby. Cropped from left and added back canvas in front of the bird. Canon 50d / 500f4 + 1.4x / f8 @ 1/1000th / iso200.
Great wing position and I love the eye and smile. I would desaturate the eye some (unless it is actually that red) and do some recovery on highlights in the wing. Crop good as well. Nice work.
A perfect pose, nice light, good sharpness, and a nice background. I like the look through the nostrils. I agree about toning down the eye a bit. Well done.
Dan, He was not very high at this point but he was trying to gain altitude.
Thanks guys for the input. This was the only one I got with the bird entirely in the frame so I was glad to get this wing position. He caught me by surprise. I will work on the eye a bit.