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    Great detail in the eye and esp. on the feathers. The OOF wing doenst bother me too much.

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    Very nice image Stuart with excellent exposure on the blacks and wonderful eye contact. I really like the crop you chose for this one. Congratulations on a fine image.

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    I like the shape of the composition, but in this case, since your BG was water or sky at infinity, closing the aperture would have given you a needed DOF for the wing without detriment to your BG. Nice soft light too and EXP right on.

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    A striking portrait, Stuart. The exposure looks to be right on with good detail in the blacks. The colors and sharpness of the head and neck are very nice and I really like the S - curve in the neck. On the other hand, I find the OOF wing to be fairly distracting in what is otherwise an excellent image.

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    I love the pose and the sharpness of the face. The o-of near wing does not bug me. I will disagree with Fabs by saying that at such close range stopping down enough (to sharpen the near-wing) would be pretty much impossibl (even if you focused half way between the eye and the bend of the near-wing.... Assuming a distance of 5 feet to the subject d-o-f at f/22 is less than one inch in front and behind the point of focus....
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    Excellent! Maybe just a slight variation in the background brightness? (This was done with a selective color adjustment layer, but curves or levels or other methods would works as well.)


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