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    Went to Fishers Green, Lea Valley Regional Park, Herts, UK. Saturday and finally unexpectedly got this image of a Bittern. What do you think ?
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    On my display the light area at the top of the frame seems to severely detract from an otherwise nice image. Without that light area you could brighten the image a bit more perhaps it seems to me.

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    I like the wing lit but I would love to see it with a little flash to bring some details out.

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    I love the mod created by the weather and the translucent wing. It could be a little lighter in the body and face, selecting that part of the bird with the selection tool of your choice and making a curves adjustment. Nice capture!

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    Thanks for the feedback. Here is edit number 2 of the image

    Fingers crossed I am going in the right direction :)

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    The light area UL fooled the meter into undexposing the bird. A SH/H adjustment should help open up the dark tones. Wonderful find and I love the backlight on the far wing. The bird is flying a bit away from you. Towards you is to be preferred.

    p: Just saw the repost which is better but still a very tough lighting condition... And the bird is still flying away
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    Thanks for your feedback. I was photographing a Black Headed Gull in flight when this fella flew out of the reed bed, I had to quickly adjust and pan as he flew across in front of me. Our birds here in the UK are camera shy, not like those posers in Florida ;)

    All advise is gratefully received :)

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    Hey Pete, I have been doing this a while so I know the drill. Even in FLA unexpectd stuff happens quickly.... You did your best, it was pretty good, and you are open to learning. Couldn't be better.
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    Artie
    Thanks, my previous post was an attempt at a bit of humour... :o
    I reckon if I had been waiting for a Bittern he would never have popped out of the reeds....

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    Lovely repost, Pete, that's exactly what I meant.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fabs Forns View Post
    Lovely repost, Pete, that's exactly what I meant.
    Thanks Fabs.... Made my day :)

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    Great opportunity and you certainly made the most of it - a very nice 'atmospheric' image in the re-post.

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