Great wing position, eye contact, and BG. The bird (especially the head) is underexposed though. I would rework it in Lightroom Gary; it's a good photo otherwise.
This image has a lot of potential Gary. The take-off action (drips from feet) and wing position are great. The main problem with the image is that at least on my monitor it is way too dark. I experimented in Ps and was able to brighten up the whole bird (minus the white belly), particularly the head using a combination of dodging and applying an Overlay Layer. You initially set the layer to 50% grey and then paint in white with a weak brush where you want the image to brighten up. Seemed to work nicely but mask off the BG when you do this or you can get a light halo around the bird.
Lovely pose. Good advice form Doug and John. John's overlay dodge/burn suggestion is a good technique. Doug's repost gives a good idea of the potential of this image but highlights the noise issue when trying to recover under-exposed images. Reprocessing the original RAW should give a better result.
Hey Gary, Great pose and water drops. Doug's re-post is a huge improvement. Tony's suggestion is the bomb. I'd go lighter on the face with a bit less contrast than Doug's version. Hope to see you out there in 3 weeks.
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