Nice action/behavior image, Rick. I like the splash behind the one on the right, and the motion blur in their wings. I might try trimming a bit from the top to minimize that brown streak, and then come in on the left and bottom too, to really draw the viewer in to the birds' faces. For some reason, there is a bit of dullness to the colors, maybe just going a bit brighter might help?
I like the action and the colours. Did a minor clockwise rotation, brightness and a different crop. The top dark bar was bothering me so cropped it despite the top being close to the wing tip. I also felt that the space at the left is a bit more. I would have liked more space on the right.
Cheers,
Sabyasachi
PS: The quality has suffered due to the further crop and corrections made on a small file.
Last edited by Sabyasachi Patra; 01-27-2009 at 09:07 AM.
Love the action/behavior here. The repost helps to bring out the gorgeous light and puts more emphasis on the subjects and the action. Wonderful capture. Just needed a bit of tweaking.
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