heron bay

[stuart wanuck]

nikon d 300 200-400 mm tc 1.4 iso 400 1225 @ 5.6

[Robert Amoruso]

Stuart,

Heron looks great and I loke the slight blur of the wings. You need more room front top and especially bottom. Also, I would clone out the stray brush behind the feet protruding into the frame.

[Maxis Gamez]

Besides what Rob said, I would remove the noise in the BG. I agree about cloning the branch out.

[Steve Maxson]

An excellent action pose, Stuart. I would second the comments of Robert and Maxis above. Also, I would tone down or clone the white areas in the lower right corner as they really draw my eye away from the bird.

[Alfred Forns]

Sure wish you could have gone vertical Stuart !!! Excellent detail on the bird and like the pose !!!

[Arthur Morris]

Nice pose, stick, wing position, and an implied sense of motion even though the head is relatively sharp. Clipping the toes, however, is a big no-no. I agree with the excellent comments and suggestions above.