F/8 gave you some good DOF and with the head turn, the position works well. You also handled the strong light well. I would try opening up the shadows on the bill to show more detail.
While I agree with Robert on the positives and agree that that the repost is better, I feel that the image is quite contrasty and does not quite look sharp. Try using a reverse S-Curve to reduce the contrast.
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YAW. The last re-post is much more pleasing to my eye than the ORIG post. Way to go.
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