Hi Layton,
Neat action! I like the wing position and sharpness and I don't mind seeing just the bill of the 1 white pelican on the right.........but I'm not thrilled with the one on the left.......as he is mostly hidden and isn't adding to the scene overall.
Great details and interaction. I don't mind the not so visible bird in the BG as it shows the white pelican's team work. Did the brown pelican give up the fish?
Hey Layton, Good seeing you at Spacecoast. No way to remove the 2nd White Pelican with all the drops. Amazing head angle on the Brown Pelican. I would go a bit lighter with the mid-tones. Great framing also; was this a crop?
Were they fighting over a fed-fish or a naturally caught one?
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